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This sucks balls :U

But it's my first time. It's not as bad as I expected,honestly.

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Okay. I do like it, but there are a few errors.
The left hand looks a little too smaller than the right hand, the breasts are a little too far up to the neck, the legs look a little too wavy, there are white dots outside the coloring, and the left arm also looks a little too short along with the hand. Not trying to offend you, I'm just being honest here. Nice colors though. I think you need to edit some of errors on here. No offense. But like I said, it still looks pretty cute to me. ;)

Sincerely,

~XxTylantxX
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:iconaquawollf:
Okay,
So I don't wanna sound mean, but I guess you know. Everything I pretty much like, except for a couple of things...
Anatomy-One arm is better than the other! The hand on the right also kinda really gets me when I look at it for some time.
etc.-The neck! She has no neck! ;A; I think adding one might be good too.
Your boobs! They're really big and round. Boobs are actually a little circle-oval shapes. Looking at examples might have helped! c:
And finally-the left arm. It looks really tiny right there. Making it a bit bigger might have really helped.
Well I hope you don't get offended, but keep in mind for what I just typed.
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!oOStarGazeOo Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I would critque but I don't want to offend.
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*Shiny-butt Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
You can critique. Hold on lemme just put the critique setting on...

If you say something that sounds rude I won't care it sucks.

And we're friends,right? So yeah..
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!oOStarGazeOo Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay , haha. c:
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*Shiny-butt Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
I put the setting on. Go critique your eyes out. XD
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!oOStarGazeOo Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sent~


By the way, could you teach me how to make journal skins?
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*Shiny-butt Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
Of course!

Just start making one any size you want,but not too small. For example,the journal skin I have used is a pretty good minimum. But just make the Skin,and I will teach you coding when it's done,okay?
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!oOStarGazeOo Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay, thanks!

Is 3,000 x 3,000 good size? I'm not doing it until I get my Tablet though. I just need ideas for positioning. XD
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*Shiny-butt Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
That's a bit too big. I'll try testing a size. Do you want it to be rectangular or square?
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*Shiny-butt Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
Thanks
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