Okay. I do like it, but there are a few errors. The left hand looks a little too smaller than the right hand, the breasts are a little too far up to the neck, the legs look a little too wavy, there are white dots outside the coloring, and the left arm also looks a little too short along with the hand. Not trying to offend you, I'm just being honest here. Nice colors though. I think you need to edit some of errors on here. No offense. But like I said, it still looks pretty cute to me.
Okay, So I don't wanna sound mean, but I guess you know. Everything I pretty much like, except for a couple of things... Anatomy-One arm is better than the other! The hand on the right also kinda really gets me when I look at it for some time. etc.-The neck! She has no neck! ;A; I think adding one might be good too. Your boobs! They're really big and round. Boobs are actually a little circle-oval shapes. Looking at examples might have helped! c: And finally-the left arm. It looks really tiny right there. Making it a bit bigger might have really helped. Well I hope you don't get offended, but keep in mind for what I just typed.
Just start making one any size you want,but not too small. For example,the journal skin I have used is a pretty good minimum. But just make the Skin,and I will teach you coding when it's done,okay?
The left hand looks a little too smaller than the right hand, the breasts are a little too far up to the neck, the legs look a little too wavy, there are white dots outside the coloring, and the left arm also looks a little too short along with the hand. Not trying to offend you, I'm just being honest here. Nice colors though. I think you need to edit some of errors on here. No offense. But like I said, it still looks pretty cute to me.
Sincerely,
~XxTylantxX
So I don't wanna sound mean, but I guess you know. Everything I pretty much like, except for a couple of things...
Anatomy-One arm is better than the other! The hand on the right also kinda really gets me when I look at it for some time.
etc.-The neck! She has no neck! ;A; I think adding one might be good too.
Your boobs! They're really big and round. Boobs are actually a little circle-oval shapes. Looking at examples might have helped! c:
And finally-the left arm. It looks really tiny right there. Making it a bit bigger might have really helped.
Well I hope you don't get offended, but keep in mind for what I just typed.
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